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2019-03-05 · 첨삭 강사 May

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Q.1 Is appearance more important in politics or show business? Answer : I think appearance is more important to politics than business. Because the business depend on interpersonal relationship and knowledge. And politics only depend on your appearance and image, i always thought. So there are many peple who believe ony what they see.

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~~May~~

I think appearance is more important to politics than business. Because the business depend on interpersonal relationship and knowledge.

>> I think appearance is more important in politics than in business because business depends on its interpersonal relationships and knowledge.

And politics only depend on your appearance and image, i always thought. So there are many peple who believe ony what they see.

>> Politics, on the other hand, only depends on appearance and public image which I always thought.

So there are many peple who believe ony what they see.

>> So, there are many people who believe only on hat they see.

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