[0309][이름]\'s Homework
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Q.What kind of dish describes you as a person?
A. What can be describe me as a person is vegitable soup. Because of I got a smooth and sweet. And I love it.
I sometimes make this dish for my family. It is very simple for this dish. You just need to the vegitable, rice, salt, peper. That\'s all.
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Hi [이름],
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-Rachel
What can be describe me as a person is vegitable soup.
>> What can describe me as a person is a vegetable soup.
>> The dish that describes me is a vegetable soup.
Because of I got a smooth and sweet. And I love it.
>> Because it is smooth and sweet, so I love it. (We don\'t use and several times)
I sometimes make this dish for my family.
I sometimes make this dish for my family.
>> correct
>> Sometimes, I prepare this dish for my family.
It is very simple for this dish. You just need to the vegitable, rice, salt, peper. That\'s all.
>> This dish needs simple ingredients. You just needs vegetables, rice, salt and pepper. That\'s all.
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