[0320][이름]\'s Homework

2019-03-20 · 첨삭 강사 May

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Hi! my Teacher May HOMEWORK: Q1. What advice would you give to today\'s adolescents? Answer I would like to say that \"Adolescents, have a dreams.\" I think, a life without dream is there is no future. And so, I would like to advise them on three things. The first thing is \" Boys, be ambitious and dreams. The second thing is always imagine yourself in 10 years, 15 years, 20 years. If they keep these three words in mind, and they are sure to succeed.

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Thanks for sharing your advice Sir [이름]! It\'s nice. ^^

~~Teacher May~~

I would like to say that \"Adolescents, have a dreams.\"

>> I would advice the adolescents to have their own dreams.

I think, a life without dream is there is no future.

>> I think that life without any ambitions lead to no future.
 And so, I would like to advise them on three things.

>> So I would like to give three advice.
 The first thing is \" Boys, be ambitious and dreams.

>> First, be ambitious and have a dream.
 The second thing is always imagine yourself in 10 years, 15 years, 20 years.

>> Second, imagine yourself 10, 15, and 20 years from now.
 If they keep these three words in mind, and they are sure to succeed.

>> If they keep these words in their mind, they will surely succeed.

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