[0320][이름]\'s Homework
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Thanks for sharing your advice Sir [이름]! It\'s nice. ^^
~~Teacher May~~
I would like to say that \"Adolescents, have a dreams.\"
>> I would advice the adolescents to have their own dreams.
I think, a life without dream is there is no future.
>> I think that life without any ambitions lead to no future.
And so, I would like to advise them on three things.
>> So I would like to give three advice.
The first thing is \" Boys, be ambitious and dreams.
>> First, be ambitious and have a dream.
The second thing is always imagine yourself in 10 years, 15 years, 20 years.
>> Second, imagine yourself 10, 15, and 20 years from now.
If they keep these three words in mind, and they are sure to succeed.
>> If they keep these words in their mind, they will surely succeed.
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