(0328)[이름]\'s homework
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HOMEWORK:
WRITING
Choose one experience from your life that is interesting enough to be told.
Answer
It is most interested that i did Bungee jumping. It is 70meters high. I was so scared but I jump off on rop of that.
In my life, it was exciting experience.
I will never do it again.
강사 첨삭
Thanks for sharing Sir [이름]! I think that was scary!
~~Teacher May~~
It is most interested that i did Bungee jumping.>> The most interesting is when I went bungee jumping.
It is 70meters high.
>> It was 70 meters high.
I was so scared but I jump off on rop of that.
>> I was on the top and I was so scared but I still jumped.
In my life, it was exciting experience.
>> It was an exciting experience in my life.
I will never do it again.
I will never do it again.
>> CORRECT
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