04. 21_Home work_[이름]
학생이 쓴 원문
I have studied English for many years. Reading is always an enjoyable task but speaking is quite a difficult task. In this class, I would like to practice correct pronunciations and control my mind which is afraid for English speaking. Plus, if teacher Sharon asks me questions about various topics, it is very helpful to me.
Many Korean suffer from improving own English writing skill and so do I. I think that I have to practice academic writing. If teacher Sharon fixes to my sentences to academic writing, the homework will be the most important task to me every day.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
It\'s good that I can get a sense of your style of writing.
If you practice every day, I know you can develop your skills.
I already see the potential in the way you write.
You just need training and I know you would definitely reach great heights.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I have studied English for many years.
>> Correct
Reading is always an enjoyable task but speaking is quite a difficult task.
>> Correct
OR>> Reading is always an enjoyable task but speaking is quite a difficult one.
In this class, I would like to practice correct pronunciations and control my mind which is afraid for English speaking.
>> In this class, I would like to practice correct pronunciation and change my mindset which is always afraid of speaking in English.
Plus, if teacher Sharon asks me questions about various topics, it is very helpful to me.
>> I think it would be very helpful for Teacher Sharon to ask me questions about various topics.
Many Korean suffer from improving own English writing skill and so do I.
Many Korean suffer from improving own English writing skill and so do I.
>> Many Koreans have trouble writing in English and so do I.
I think that I have to practice academic writing.
>> Correct
If teacher Sharon fixes to my sentences to academic writing, the homework will be the most important task to me every day.
>> If Teacher Sharon corrects my sentences to fit academic writing, the homework part will be the most important task for me every day.
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