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I barely have conversations with a person who lives in a foreign country, Of course, I want to talk with foreigners, however, there are few chances which talk with foreigners in Korea.
I live in Japan 10 years ago and I met quite many friends in there. Despite we spend much time together, after leaving Japan, the connections with Japanese friends was disconnected. In my opinion, maintaining a friendship with foreigners are required many efforts. Nonetheless, this task is worth to try.
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~~ Teacher Sharon
I barely have conversations with a person who lives in a foreign country, >> I barely have conversations with people who live in a foreign country.
Of course, I want to talk with foreigners, however, there are few chances which talk with foreigners in Korea.
>> Of course, I want to talk with foreigners, however, there are few chances to talk with foreigners in Korea.
I live in Japan 10 years ago and I met quite many friends in there.
I live in Japan 10 years ago and I met quite many friends in there.
>> I lived in Japan 10 years ago and I met quite a lot of friends there.
Despite we spend much time together, after leaving Japan, the connections with Japanese friends was disconnected.
>> Despite the fact that we spent much time together, I lost touch with my Japanese friends after I left Japan.
In my opinion, maintaining a friendship with foreigners are required many efforts.
>> In my opinion, maintaining a friendship with foreigners requires much effort.
Nonetheless, this task is worth to try.
>> Nonetheless, this task is worth a try.
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