[0402][이름]\'s Homework

2020-04-03 · 첨삭 강사 Rachel

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Q.Would you like to challenge a marathon with your son? Why or why not? A. I think so. I\'d like to challenge a marathon with my son. But my son and me don\'t like running. We just like walking around the park. Now we can\'t a marathon because of a corona virus. So These day, we can\'t running together, he is at home, taking a online lecture that is a mathematics, english, and social at home. In here, I\'m climbing instead of a marathon with my wife. Today in the morining, the reason why the call didn\'t work well that I have a weak network at home. When I stay in Dajeon, it is work well.

강사 첨삭

Hi Sir [이름]!

Thanks for the reply to the homework you were given:) It is a good one:) The weak connection is not a problem. I was able to hear you somehow.

-Rachel

I think so. I\'d like to challenge a marathon with my son. But my son and me don\'t like running. We just like walking around the park.

>> correct (awesome sentences)

Now we can\'t a marathon because of a corona virus. So These day, we can\'t running together, he is at home, taking a online lecture that is a mathematics, english, and social at home.

>> Now, we can\'t do marathon because of the corona virus, so these days, we can\'t go running together. He is at home taking online classes in mathematics, English and social studies.
In here, I\'m climbing instead of a marathon with my wife.

>> in here, I\'m climbing with my wife instead of doing a marathon.
Today in the morining, the reason why the call didn\'t work well that I have a weak network at home. When I stay in Dajeon, it is work well.

>> Today in the morning, the reason why the call didn\'t work well is that I have a weak network at home, but when I am in Daejon, it works well.

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