[0406][이름]\'s Homework
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Q. Do you believe in ghost?
A. No, I afraid that I don\'t believe in ghosts. Because I\'ll never believe it unless I see it with my own eyes. But when I was a child, I had believed in ghosts and I was afraid of them. But now, it isn\'t. And also, I don\'t believe in God, but there are sometimes when I rely on God, And then when I\'m alone in the night and miss my late father. So there are many times when I want believe in God.
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Hi [이름],
This is a great answer to the question you were given. Thank you for squeezing some time to do it even if you have a hectic schedule:)
-Rachel
No, I afraid that I don\'t believe in ghosts. Because I\'ll never believe it unless I see it with my own eyes.
>>correct (we just say I\'m instead of I)
But when I was a child, I had believed in ghosts and I was afraid of them. But now, it isn\'t.
>> When I was a child, I believed in ghosts and I was afraid of them, but now, I am not.
And also, I don\'t believe in God, but there are sometimes when I rely on God, And then when I\'m alone in the night and miss my late father. So there are many times when I want believe in God.
>> correct (awesome sentences)
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