[0408][이름]\'s homework
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Q. If a close friend or a family member borrows a huge amount of money from you, would you trust the person and lend him/her some money? Why or why not?
A. I will never lend the moeny their, not because I don\'t believe it. I think that It isn\'t problem of trust or not trust.
Owing to the money problem, because we are able to ague and fight with each other everyday. I don\'t like this.
In the end, I think always that you must not borrow and lend anybody.
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Hi [이름],
Thanks for the reply to the homework you were given. The sentences are long and you tried to use good words, so great job!
-Rachel
I will never lend the moeny their, not because I don\'t believe it.
>> I will never lend money to them not because I don\'t believe them.
I think that It isn\'t problem of trust or not trust.
>> I think it is not a problem about trust or mistrust.
Owing to the money problem, because we are able to ague and fight with each other everyday. I don\'t like this.
Owing to the money problem, because we are able to ague and fight with each other everyday. I don\'t like this.
>> Owing money is the problem because it leads to arguments and misunderstandings everyday, and I don\'t like this.
In the end, I think always that you must not borrow and lend anybody.
In the end, I think always that you must not borrow and lend anybody.
>> correct
>> In the end, I think it is better not to borrow or lend money from anybody.
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