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Q. Is it easy for you to gain people\'s trust? Why or why not?
A. To gain people\'s trust is three, this is my thought. The first is, you should not lie to their. If you do like this, you can\'t talk to anyone who is friends, acacquaintances and colleagues. Eventually, their relationship will be grow apart.
The second is a match between one\'s words and actions. It is a idiom in Korea. If they aren\'t matched, how can we gain their\'s trust.
I think the last one is \" Thank you\". I always express people or everyone who help me. Maybe everyone will do like me.
That is raise the more trust each other and we will gain more and more their\'s trust. I believe that, and I want to believe that.
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To gain people\'s trust is three, this is my thought.
>> I think, there are three things needed to gain people\'s trust.
The first is, you should not lie to their.
>> The first is not to lie to them.
If you do like this, you can\'t talk to anyone who is friends, acacquaintances and colleagues.
>> If you do this, your friends, acquaintances and colleagues will stop communicating with you because they don\'t believe you.
Eventually, their relationship will be grow apart.
>> correct
The second is a match between one\'s words and actions. It is a idiom in Korea.
The second is a match between one\'s words and actions. It is a idiom in Korea.
>> correct (acceptable in spoken English)
>> Second, your words and actions should match. This is an idiom in Korea.
If they aren\'t matched, how can we gain their\'s trust.
>> correct (we just say their trust not their\'s)
I think the last one is \" Thank you\". I always express people or everyone who help me.
I think the last one is \" Thank you\". I always express people or everyone who help me.
>> correct (acceptable in spoken English)
>> I think the last one is showing gratitude. I always express my gratitude to people or everyone who helped me.
Maybe everyone will do like me.
>>correct
That is raise the more trust each other and we will gain more and more their\'s trust.
That is raise the more trust each other and we will gain more and more their\'s trust.
>> This increases trust in people and if they follow these three they will gain more.
I believe that, and I want to believe that.
>> correct
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