0412 [이름]\'s homework

2019-04-15 · 첨삭 강사 May

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HOMEWORK: WRITING TASK Answer the question briefly. What are the minimum qualifications needed to do the job that you have? Answer I work at the KT&G(Korea Tomorrow & Global) Corp and I\'m the sales team leader. We need to do a lot of qualifications . It is a communication skill, negotiation skill, and broad knowledge. We need a driver\'s license to do this job. The reason why we need to visit the store. The last thing is foreign language. There is many opportunities to work at foreign country. Among them, English is the important language.

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Thanks for doing your homework [이름]! Yes. English is very important.

Having the knowledge in English will make you more qualified to do a

certain job. ^^

~~Teacher May~~

I work at the KT&G(Korea Tomorrow & Global) Corp and I\'m the sales team leader.

>> I work at KT&G(Korea Tomorrow & Global) Corp and I\'m the sales manager.
We need to do a lot of qualifications. It is a communication skill, negotiation skill, and broad knowledge.

>> We need a lot of qualifications - communication skill, negotiation skill, and broad knowledge.

We need a driver\'s license to do this job.

>> CORRECT

The reason why we need to visit the store.

>> We need it so that we can visit the store at any time.
The last thing is foreign language.

>> The last thing is the knowledge in foreign language.

There is many opportunities to work at foreign country.

>> There are many opportunities to work at a foreign country.
Among them, English is the important language.

>> Therefore, English is the important language.

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