[0413][이름]\'s homework
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Q. Do you think your President is trustworthy, why or why not?
A. Yes, I think so. Because he is honest man more than a former President and he always helps the weak, listen to their voices. Whenever he making national policy, he usually applys the policy of the common people in priority. So I always support him and his party.
I had a pre-voting vote of a member of the National Asembly on April 11, 12. And April 15 os the National Asembly Election once every four years.
The party\'s name is \'the Democratic Party\'
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Hi [이름],
That was a quick response! You are a diligent student, and thank you for giving your honest opinion about your President.
-Rachel
Yes, I think so. Because he is honest man more than a former President and he always helps the weak, listen to their voices.
>> Yes, I think so because he is an honest man, more than the former President, and he always helps the weak and listens to their voices.
Whenever he making national policy, he usually applys the policy of the common people in priority.
>> Whenever he makes a national policy, he usually considers the policy for the common people and makes it a priority.
So I always support him and his party.
>> correct
I had a pre-voting vote of a member of the National Asembly on April 11, 12. And April 15 os the National Asembly Election once every four years.>> I did a pre-voting for the members of the National Assembly on April 11 and 12. The National Assembly Election happens once in four years.
The party\'s name is \'the Democratic Party.
>> correct
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