(0414)[이름]\'s home work
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Q.What can make you believe other people?
A. To make me believe other people is, I think that is only trust each other. If we have it, we will depend, work togather and come true our drams. But If we didn\' have it, they don\'t believe each other and so on they fight, hate and getting farther away. So To make me believe other people need to the trust eaxctly.
Thanks for your reading my essay.
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Hi Sir [이름],
That was quick! You truly are one diligent student:) Keep it up!
-Rachel
To make me believe other people is, I think that is only trust each other.
>> I think to make me believe other people is only to trust each other.
If we have it, we will depend, work together and come true our drams.
>> If we have trust, we can depend on each other and work together to make our dreams come true.
But If we didn\' have it, they don\'t believe each other and so on they fight, hate and getting farther away.
>> On the other hand, if we lose trust, we don\'t believe each other and start fighting and hating each other which will make the relationship distanced (strained).
So To make me believe other people need to the trust exactly.
>> So to make me believe other people, I need to trust them as they do to me.
Thanks for your reading my essay.
Thanks for your reading my essay.
>> correct (you\'re welcome Sir, it\'s a good essay)
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