0415 [이름]\'s homework

2019-04-15 · 첨삭 강사 May

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HOMEWORK: WRITING TASK Answer the question: What\'s your philosophy on life? Answer My philosophy on life is to live happily forever. I don\'t think there is anything as important in life as having fun. And I have also one that I should be to live without harming other people.

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Thanks for doing your homework [이름]!
My philosophy in life is: \"Life is short. Live life to the fullest.\" ^^
~~Teacher May~~
My philosophy on life is to live happily forever.
>> My philosophy in life is to live happily forever.
I don\'t think there is anything as important in life as having fun.
>> Correct
Or >> I don\'t think there is anything that as important in life as having fun.
And I have also one that I should be to live without harming other people.
>> And I should also live without harming other people.

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