0415[이름]\'s Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
A. What do you usually do after a long day?
B. When I usually come home after work, first of all, I have to take a shower cleanly and take a toothbrush. After a shower, I have a dinner while watching a news on TV for one hour. And then I take a rest for a minute, next is read books, study English utill 10 pm. And I watch American dramas series on neflix. I go to bed sbout at 11pm after wacth a dramas.
And I usually spend for a long day with my family on holiday in Seoul.
We climb the MT, go to eat out, and go drive to the countryside.
강사 첨삭
Hi Sir [이름],
Thank you for diligently answering the homework I give you even if you have a tight schedule. Great job!
-Rachel
When I usually come home after work, first of all, I have to take a shower cleanly and take a toothbrush.
>> When I return home after work, first of all, I have to take a shower and brush my teeth.
After a shower, I have a dinner while watching a news on TV for one hour.
>> After showering, I have my dinner while watching news on TV for an hour.
And then I take a rest for a minute, next is read books, study English utill 10 pm.
>> And then I take a rest for a minute, read books and study English until 10 PM.
And I watch American dramas series on neflix. I go to bed sbout at 11pm after wacth a dramas.
>> Finally, I watch an American drama series on Netflix and go to bed at about 11 PM.
And I usually spend for a long day with my family on holiday in Seoul.
And I usually spend for a long day with my family on holiday in Seoul.
>> Usually, I spend my long day with my family in Seoul if it is a holiday.
We climb the MT, go to eat out, and go drive to the countryside.
We climb the MT, go to eat out, and go drive to the countryside.
>> We climb the mountain, eat out and go for a drive to the countryside.
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