[0416][이름]\'s homework
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I\'m sorry this class in the morning. I didn\'t hear well, so as I heard recording file again that I knew your question. The ruling party that you asked for me is not the Liberal Party but the Democratic party.
Q. What other political reforms would you like to be introduced in Korea?
A. I think that the politicians must have to change their consciouses than political reforms. In this time,The ruling party got a 180seats out of 300 but they doing very well than now. They have to make the policy for the common people, by peoples.
I believe that they will do best for Korea. In conclusion, I think that political reforms means to control thir mind by themselves to do the right politics.
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Happy Friday Sir [이름]!
This is an awesome response to your homework. I agree that in order to bring changes in the society, the politicians have to reform themselves first. Also, about the lesson we had in the morning yesterday, it\'s okay. You didn\'t do anything, so there is nothing to be sorry about. As fat as I know, in politics, most democratic parties have liberal tendencies. ^ ^
-Rachel
I think that the politicians must have to change their consciouses than political reforms.
>> I think that politicians must have to change or must have a clean conscience first before introducing political reforms.
In this time,The ruling party got a 180seats out of 300 but they doing very well than now.
>> At this time, the ruling party got 180 out of 300 seats but they have to do better than now.
They have to make the policy for the common people, by peoples.
>> correct
I believe that they will do best for Korea. In conclusion, I think that political reforms means to control their mind by themselves to do the right politics.
I believe that they will do best for Korea. In conclusion, I think that political reforms means to control their mind by themselves to do the right politics.
>> correct
>> I think they will give their best for Korea. In conclusion, I think political reforms means that politicians should control their minds and do the right politics.
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