[0420][이름]\'s homework
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Q.Would you rather spend a long day with your family or colleagues or spend your day alone and why?
A. Of course, I\'d rather spend a long day with my family. Because when I\'m alone, I would spend pointless time for a long day. But It is often not happen to do that. And then I\'m watching TV more than reading books and sleeping more than work out. If I do like this, the long day is getting longer and bored and not interested. You khow what It is true and I think you may have experinenced it.
On the other hand, when I\'m with my family, we can go on a trip, go shopping and play board game together. Maybe the time will pass quickly and I can spend meaningful time for a long time with my family.
And when I stay alone in Djeon, I get a plan to carry out for a day schedul. I\'d say that the plan are go fishing, hiking, climbing mountain.
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Good Morning Sir [이름],
Thanks for the response to the homework you were given, and it is a long one, so I am impressed. Keep it up!
-Rachel
Of course, I\'d rather spend a long day with my family. Because when I\'m alone, I would spend pointless time for a long day.
>> Definitely, I\'d rather spend a long day with my family because I think it is pointless to spend the long day by myself.
But It is often not happen to do that. And then I\'m watching TV more than reading books and sleeping more than work out. If I do like this, the long day is getting longer and bored and not interested. You khow what It is true and I think you may have experinenced it.
>> I don\'t spend time alone much though, and when I do, I watch TV, read books and more than working out. If I do this, I feel like the day is longer and it is boring. I am sure you know that this is true because you may have experienced it too.
On the other hand, when I\'m with my family, we can go on a trip, go shopping and play board game together. Maybe the time will pass quickly and I can spend meaningful time for a long time with my family.
On the other hand, when I\'m with my family, we can go on a trip, go shopping and play board game together. Maybe the time will pass quickly and I can spend meaningful time for a long time with my family.
>> correct
And when I stay alone in Daejeon, I get a plan to carry out for a day schedule. I\'d say that the plan are go fishing, hiking, climbing mountain.
And when I stay alone in Daejeon, I get a plan to carry out for a day schedule. I\'d say that the plan are go fishing, hiking, climbing mountain.
>> And when I\'m alone in Daejon, I make an itinerary to carry out during the day. It includes going fishing, hiking and climbing mountain.
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