0422[이름]\'s Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
WRITING TASK:
Answer the questions.
What is your favorite job interview question?
How did/will you answer it?
Answer
The question to apply for the company is \'what is your motive of application to the company?\'
I will answer it.
I hoped and I was ready to entry this company for a long time ago.
I think that my major is similiar to work of this company. And I always thsught that this place where my dream come true is KT&G Co.
강사 첨삭
You deserve your position Sir [이름]! Happy for you! ^^
~~Teacher May~~
The question to apply for the company is \'what is your motive of application to the company?\'>> The question asked in a job interview is \'what is your purpose in applying the company?\'
I will answer it.
>> CORRECT
I hoped and I was ready to entry this company for a long time ago.
I hoped and I was ready to entry this company for a long time ago.
>> I hoped and I was ready to enter this company for a long time.
I think that my major is similiar to work of this company.
I think that my major is similiar to work of this company.
>> I think that my major is related to my job in this company.
And I always thsught that this place where my dream come true is KT&G Co.
>> And I always thought that this company, KT&G Co, is where my dream came true.
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