[0422][이름]\'s homework
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Q. If you were to spend a long day with someone special, a VIP or a celebrity, who would it be and why?
A. Definitely, I\'ll spend with a celebrity. If I were to spend with someone special, I\'d would like to spend with a celebrity. Because I think It will be great fun, a lot talking to them and we\'ll be able to drink a lot comfortely for a long day. But on the other hand, I\'d spend with a VIP, to spend a long time is very boring, not be fun and we\'ll be able to have a comfortable conversation. And he would rather talk about a public work than a private matter, so I would rather spend with a celebrity.
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Hi Sir [이름],
Thanks as always for the quick response to the homework you were given. The story is amusing:)
-Rachel
Definitely, I\'ll spend with a celebrity. If I were to spend with someone special, I\'d would like to spend with a celebrity.
>> I will definitely spend a long with a celebrity.
Because I think It will be great fun, a lot talking to them and we\'ll be able to drink a lot comfortely for a long day.
>> Because I think it will be greatly fun talking to him or her and we\'ll be able to drink comfortably after a long day.
But on the other hand, I\'d spend with a VIP, to spend a long time is very boring, not be fun and we\'ll be able to have a comfortable conversation. And he would rather talk about a public work than a private matter, so I would rather spend with a celebrity.
>> On the other hand, if I spend my time with a VIP, it would be very boring and the conversation would not be comfortable. We would probably be talking about public work instead of private or personal matter, so I would rather spend my time with a celebrity.
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