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2020-04-23 · 첨삭 강사 Rachel

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Q.Have you experienced not being able to sleep the whole night because something was bothering you? What did you do? A. Yes. I rarely have had that experience before. It doesn\'t happen very often. I tend to sleep well at night. But once, I couldn\'t sleep because of two things. There are work and worries. I couldn\'t sleep, so I try to read books, watch movies and then I thaught I would fall asleep, but don\'t do that. Finally, I ended up staying all night with open eyes. The next time, I couldn\'t sleep, then I have plan try to drink a bottle of SO-JU.

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Hi Sir [이름],
Thank you for diligently answering your homework and for finding time to do it:) You are awesome!
-Rachel 
Yes. I rarely have had that experience before. It doesn\'t happen very often. I tend to sleep well at night. But once, I couldn\'t sleep because of two things.
>> Yes, I have had a rare experience before because it doesn\'t happen often. I tend to sleep well at night, but once I couldn\'t sleep because of two reasons.
There are work and worries. I couldn\'t sleep, so I try to read books, watch movies and then I thaught I would fall asleep, but don\'t do that. 
>> I had to do lots of work, and I had a lot of worries, so I couldn\'t sleep. I tried to read books, and watch movies thinking that I would fall asleep, but I couldn\'t. 
Finally, I ended up staying all night with open eyes. The next time, I couldn\'t sleep, then I have plan try to drink a bottle of SO-JU.
>> I ended up staying all night with eyes open wide. The next time this happens, I plan to drink a bottle of Soju. 

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