0518[이름]\'s Homework

2020-05-19 · 첨삭 강사 Rachel

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Q.If you are going to drink with a celebrity, who would you choose and why? A. If I\'m going to drink with a celebrity I\'d like to choose who she\'s name is Na Rae Park. She is a famous gagwomen in Korea. She took the entainment award in December of last year. She is short and ugly but very funny, be a good speaker and always many people join with her. Nowaday, she is very busy because of she is appearing on many TV show. The one of a TV show is \" I live alone\" I wonder if I can drink with her. I Just thought about it.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],

Thanks for this response to the homework you were given. It is an interesting story. I have seen her in one TV show but I forgot the name, and I think she is truly a funny person, so I am not wondering why you would want to hang out with her. ^^

-Rachel

If I\'m going to drink with a celebrity I\'d like to choose who she\'s name is Na Rae Park. She is a famous gagwomen in Korea. She took the entainment award in December of last year.

>> If I were to drink with a celebrity, I would choose Na Rae Park. She\'s a famous gag woman in Korea, and last year, she took the entertainment award in December.
She is short and ugly but very funny, be a good speaker and always many people join with her.

>> She is short and not very pretty, but she is funny. She is also a good speaker and many people hang out with her.
Nowaday, she is very busy because of she is appearing on many TV show.

>> Nowadays, she is very busy because she is appearing on many TV shows.
The one of a TV show is \" I live alone\"

>> One of them is called, I Live Alone.
I wonder if I can drink with her. I Just thought about it.

>> correct

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