[0519][이름]\'s homework
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Q. If you could go fishing with someone, who would it be and why?
A. If I could go fishing with someone, i would go with the people who I like. In other words, I would go with my best friends, my captain and family member. There are many reasons for that but one of them is the most important reason that I comfort to go fishing with them. And because I can talk and joke a lot more than other things.
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Hi Sir [이름],
This is a good response to the homework you were given. Thank you for finding time to do it despite your busy schedule.
-Rachel
If I could go fishing with someone, i would go with the people who I like.
>> correct
In other words, I would go with my best friends, my captain and family member.
>> correct ( I just couldn\'t understand what captain means here. Does it mean your supervisor?)
There are many reasons for that but one of them is the most important reason that I comfort to go fishing with them.
>> There are many reasons for that but one of them is when I am with them I feel comfortable.
And because I can talk and joke a lot more than other things.
>> Because I can talk comfortably and joke a lot compared to when I am with other people.
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