[0603][이름]\'s Homework
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Q. What reasons do you have for working just half of the day?
A. The reasons why I work half of the day are when I have a sick, the event of family, and plan to go travel.
The company employees are somtimes work half of the day. I usually can use 24 days a day. This is decided by Lavor standards law.
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[이름]! Thank you for this. :)
- T. Beth
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The reasons why I work half of the day are when I have a sick, the event of family, and plan to go travel. >>>> The reasons why I work half of the day are when I am sick, there is an event in the family, and plan to go travel.
The company employees are somtimes work half of the day.
The company employees are somtimes work half of the day.
>>>> The company employees sometimes work half of the day.
I usually can use 24 days a day.
>>>> I usually can use 24 hours a day.
This is decided by Lavor standards law.
>>>> This is decided by labor standard law.
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