[0610][이름]\'s Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Question
> Which is your favorite season? Why do you like it?
Answer
> There are four seasons in Korea. I like winter the most out of the four season. Winter seasons include December, January and February. We have just during 3 months. It is very short.
The reason why I like winter is snowing. I could be ski, make a snowman, and see the view of snow in the mountain. and so I love it.
I don\'t like to wet my cloths with sweat and have to change cloths often. So I don\'t like the summer.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]. Thank you once again for this. I appreciate the effort.
- T. Beth
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There are four seasons in Korea. >>> correct
I like winter the most out of the four season.
>>> correct
Winter seasons include December, January and February.
>>> Winter season includes the months of December, January and February.
>>> Winter season takes place from December to February.
We have just during 3 months.
>>> correct
It is very short.
>>> correct
The reason why I like winter is snowing.
>>> The reason why I like winter is the snow.
I could be ski, make a snowman, and see the view of snow in the mountain. and so I love it.
>>> I could go skiing, make a snowman, and see the view of snow in the mountain so I love it.
I don\'t like to wet my cloths with sweat and have to change cloths often.
>>> I don\'t like my clothes to soak in sweat and have to change them often.
So I don\'t like the summer.
>>> correct
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