0611[이름]\'s Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Homework
> When is the best season to visit Korea?
Answer
The best season is two. It is winter and summer season.
When you visit to korea in summer, Haeunde beach in Busan is famous for its summer tourism. There are peoples in Busan for summer vacation.
The second best season is winter.
Many of other country peoples are visit to Pyeonchang in Gangwon.
It is snows a lot there, a place where many peoples visit to ski.
Seolak mountain famous for veiw of snow.
I\'m sorry, Beth. This week, I\'m on a business trip in Seoul. So I can\'t take a class untill Friday.
From [이름].
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. It\'s okay. Good luck on your business trip. I\'ll see you next week then.
- T. Beth
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The best season is two. >>> OR: There are two best seasons.
It is winter and summer season.
>>> They are winter and summer season.
When you visit to korea in summer, Haeunde beach in Busan is famous for its summer tourism.
When you visit to korea in summer, Haeunde beach in Busan is famous for its summer tourism.
>>> correct ( When you visit Korea in summer, Haeunde beach in Busan is famous for its summer tourism. )
There are peoples in Busan for summer vacation.
>>> correct
The second best season is winter.
The second best season is winter.
>>> correct
Many of other country peoples are visit to Pyeonchang in Gangwon.
Many of other country peoples are visit to Pyeonchang in Gangwon.
>>> Many foreigners visit Pyeonchang in Gangwon.
It is snows a lot there, a place where many peoples visit to ski.
It is snows a lot there, a place where many peoples visit to ski.
>>> It snows a lot there, a place where many peoples visit to ski.
Seolak mountain famous for veiw of snow.
>>> Seolak mountain is famous for its view of snow.
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