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Question
Where is the best place in your country to spend winter?
Answer
The best place where is two place. One is Muju, North Jeolla Province and the other is Pyeongchang, Gangwon Province.
These place are famous for ski and snow sled in the winter season, there are many people who spend there for ski on December, January.
This place where visit another country\'s people, and it is exciting. We could be spend a great times on a vacation.
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Hello [이름]! Thank you for this. As you may know, I have never experienced winter. These places seem good for a winter experience.
- T. Beth
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The best place where is two place. >>> There are two best places to spend winter.
One is Muju, North Jeolla Province and the other is Pyeongchang, Gangwon Province.
>>> correct
These place are famous for ski and snow sled in the winter season, there are many people who spend there for ski on December, January.
>>> These places are famous for skiing and snow sledding in the winter season. There are many people who spend time there for skiing in December and January.
These place are famous for ski and snow sled in the winter season, there are many people who spend there for ski on December, January.
>>> These places are famous for skiing and snow sledding in the winter season. There are many people who spend time there for skiing in December and January.
This place where visit another country\'s people, and it is exciting.
>>> This place is visited by foreign people and it is exciting.
We could be spend a great times on a vacation.
>>> We could spend a great time here for vacation.
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