0624[이름]\'s Homework

2019-06-24 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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Question What’s the best diet you’ve tried so far? Answer On 2015, I had lost weight 18kg. At that time, my weight was 78 before. I was swimming, running and playing golf everyday from 5am to 8am in the morning for 6 month. Now I think it was amasing. Since when I didn\'t stop on diet, now my weight is 70kg, and somtimes work out at the gym 3,4 times a week. I work out at the gym of company 2 times. The rest of 2 out of 4 is weekend. Nowadays, I steadily exercise to healthy.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Thank you for this. That\'s great! Just keep incorporating working out in your lifestyle. Make exercise a part of your lifestyle. Which I think I should do too. I need to go back to the gym. :)

- T. Beth

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On 2015, I had lost weight 18kg.

>>> In 2015, I had lost weight of 18 kgs.
At that time, my weight was 78 before.

>>> At that time, I weighed 78 kgs before I went on a diet.

I was swimming, running and playing golf everyday from 5am to 8am in the morning for 6 month.

>>> I did swimming, running and playing golf everyday from 5am to 8am in the morning for 6 months.

Now I think it was amasing.

>>> Now I think it was amazing.

Since when I didn\'t stop on diet, now my weight is 70kg, and somtimes work out at the gym 3,4 times a week.

>>> Since I stopped going on a diet, my weight is now 70 kgs and sometimes I work out at the gym 3 to 4 times a week.

I work out at the gym of company 2 times.

>>> I work out at the gym in my company 2 times.

The rest of 2 out of 4 is weekend.

>>> The rest, I do it in the weekend.
Nowadays, I steadily exercise to healthy.

>>> Nowadays, I steadily exercise to be healthy.

>>> OR: Nowadays, I steadily exercise for my health.

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