0702[이름]\'s Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Question
> What is usually causing you stress? How do you deal with it?
Answer
> The cause of stress is how do you think or accept stress of themseves.
I think about it. So, If you accept stress to stress, that is one. And If you accept stress to positive thaught, that is not stress. Dealing with it was depended on self -control of myself. I always think about everything positively. And so It is absolutely comfortble in all side.
This is just on my way to deal with it.
Thank you. Have a nice day.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. You do have a point. Stress differs for every person. It is a matter of mind.
- T. Beth
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The cause of stress is how do you think or accept stress of themseves. >>>> The cause of stress is how people think or accept stress themselves.
I think about it.
I think about it.
>>>> correct
>>>> OR: It depends on the way I think about it.
So, If you accept stress to stress, that is one.
>>>> So, if you accept stress as stress, it will be.
And If you accept stress to positive thaught, that is not stress.
>>>> But if you accept stress to be positive thought then it is not stress.
Dealing with it was depended on self -control of myself.
>>>> Dealing with it depends on my self-control.
I always think about everything positively.
>>>> correct
And so It is absolutely comfortble in all side.
>>>> And so, it is absolutely comfortable in all sides.
This is just on my way to deal with it.
>>>> This is just my own way to deal with it.
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