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학생이 쓴 원문
Q.
Why is sleep significant?
A.
The reason why sleep is important that it is good for mental healthy. Also, when you was child age, it is good well for the child growth. I guess about it.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. yes, sleep is necessary for everybody. When I was a child, my parents forced me to sleep. I hated sleeping in the middle of the day because I preferred to play.
- T. Beth
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The reason why sleep is important that it is good for mental healthy. >>> The reason why sleep is important is it\'s good for mental health.
Also, when you was child age, it is good well for the child growth.
>>> Also, when we were children, it is good for a child\'s growth.
I guess about it.
>>> I made a guess about it.
>>> OR: It\'s just a wild guess.
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