[0731][이름]\'s home work
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~Teacher Lucy
A : I think, good things that it just makes for me happily.
>> I think good things make me happy.
That is the pleasure of seeing, eating and makes a cooking and so I\'d like to make a cooking for my famiily.
>> That is the pleasure of seeing, eating and cooking and so I\'d like to cook for my family.
I sometime used to make a cooking on the weekeend.
>> I used to cook on the weekend.
>>I sometimes cook on the weekend.
Actually, The cooking makes other peoples happy.
>>Actually, cooking makes some people happy.
If it is not taste, they might angry to me.
>> If it is not tasty, they might get angry at me.
A : The peoples who should be better at cooking are husbands, I think.
>>The people who should be better at cooking are husbands, I think.
>>I think the people who should be better at cooking are husbands.
Because wives are always make a in the kitchen for family.
>>Because wives are always in the kitchen for their family.
so they must not have made a cooking.
>>so they must not have introduced cooking.
And they have no interesting in cooking.
>>And they have no interest in cooking.
In other hand, husbands are interest in cooking.
>>On the other hand, husbands are more interested in cooking.
They\'d like to make a cooking for others.
>>They\'d like to cook for others.
They haven\'t cooked in the past.
>>CORRECT!
>>They didn\'t cook decades ago.
Of course, husbands shuld be better at cooking.
>> Of course, husbands should be better at cooking.
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