[0731][이름]\'s home work

2019-08-01 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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Q1. What is good about cooking? A : I think, good things that it just makes for me happily. That is the pleasure of seeing, eating and makes a cooking and so I\'d like to make a cooking for my famiily. I sometime used to make a cooking on the weekeend. Actually, The cooking makes other peoples happy. If it is not taste, they might angry to me. Q2. Who should be better at cooking, husbands or wives? A : The peoples who should be better at cooking are husbands, I think. Because wives are always make a in the kitchen for family. so they must not have made a cooking. And they have no interesting in cooking. In other hand, husbands are interest in cooking. They\'d like to make a cooking for others. They haven\'t cooked in the past. Of course, husbands shuld be better at cooking.

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Thank you Mr. [이름]!


~Teacher Lucy


A : I think, good things that it just makes for me happily.

>> I think good things make me happy.


 That is the pleasure of seeing, eating and makes a cooking and so I\'d like to make a cooking for my famiily.

>> That is the pleasure of seeing, eating and cooking and so I\'d like to cook for my family.


 I sometime used to make a cooking on the weekeend.

>> I used to cook on the weekend.

>>I sometimes cook on the weekend.


Actually, The cooking makes other peoples happy.

>>Actually, cooking makes some people happy.


 If it is not taste, they might angry to me.

>> If it is not tasty, they might get angry at me.


A : The peoples who should be better at cooking are husbands, I think.

>>The people who should be better at cooking are husbands, I think.

>>I think the people who should be better at cooking are husbands.


 Because wives are always make a in the kitchen for family.

>>Because wives are always in the kitchen for their family.


so they must not have made a cooking.

>>so they must not have introduced cooking.


 And they have no interesting in cooking.

>>And they have no interest in cooking.


In other hand, husbands are interest in cooking.

>>On the other hand, husbands are more interested in cooking.


 They\'d like to make a cooking for others.

>>They\'d like to  cook for others.


 They haven\'t cooked in the past.

>>CORRECT!

>>They didn\'t cook decades ago. 


 Of course, husbands shuld be better at cooking.

>> Of course, husbands should be better at cooking.

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