0829[이름]\'s Homework

2019-08-29 · 첨삭 강사 May

학생이 쓴 원문

Q. Is it okay to do something wrong as long as you have a good excuse? Why? A. Yes, it is. I believe in be a good lie. I think It\'s never hurt other people. Because it is just for people. So I sometimes have a good excuse to my wife, friends. and colleague. You know what, I would say, it is sometimes necessery. To protect, do not to wrong way, and because of lovely of my life.

강사 첨삭

Thanks for doing your homework [이름]! I appreciate it. ^^

~~Teacher May~~

Yes, it is.

>> CORRECT

I believe in be a good lie.

>> I believe in good lies.

I think It\'s never hurt other people.

Because it is just for people.

>> I think it never hurts other people because it\'s for them.

So I sometimes have a good excuse to my wife, friends. and colleague.

You know what, I would say, it is sometimes necessary.

>> CORRECT

To protect, do not to wrong way, and because of lovely of my life.

>> To protect ourselves, do the right way, because it will make our life lovelier.

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