0902[이름]\'s Homework

2019-09-03 · 첨삭 강사 May

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Q.Companies spend millions each year on advertising online, in magazines, and on billboards. These adverts can encourage people to buy goods even if they don’t really need it. What are the positive and negative effects of this? A. They have to advertise to spend millions to survive the competition. This is an undenied fact anyone. The first positive thing, many peoples get to know launching the new goods by advertisement. Because If you don\'t interest, you don\'t know it. The second negative thing is. these adverts encourage people to buy goods even if they don\'t really need it. So am I.

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They have to advertise to spend
millions to survive the competition.

>> They advertise by spending millions to win the competition.
This is an undenied fact anyone.

>> This is an undeniable fact.
The first positive thing, many peoples get to know launching the new goods by advertisement. Because
If you don\'t interest, you don\'t know it.

>> The positive thing is that many people get to know the new launched goods on advertisements. If you aren\'t interested, you will not know it.
The second negative thing is. these adverts encourage people to buy goods even if they don\'t really need it.
So am I.

>> The negative thing is that these adverts encourage people to buy goods even if they don\'t really need it. So am I.

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