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Q. Do parents in your country find time to steer clear of food hurting their kids?
A. I don\'t understand little bit in your question. By the way I will answer you. Could you understand me?
Absolutely, Parents in my country always find time to steer clear of food hurting their kids. And they alway don\'t have food hurting kids. They worry about that many of kids woud rather progressed foods than organic foods. So they decide to have progressed food by family meeting once a week. so they eat out once or twice a month for their kids.
In my case, I prefer to have vegetebles all the time, in the morning drink fruit juice and go to work. In the evening eat less.
And when we have free time, I do walking around home for one two hour. That is to our healthy.
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Absolutely, Parents in my country always find time to steer clear of food hurting their kids. And they alway don\'t have food hurting kids.
>>Absolutely! Parents in my country always find time to steer clear of food hurting their kids. And they always expel foods hurting kids.
They worry about that many of kids woud rather progressed foods than organic foods.
>>They worry that many kids would rather eat processed foods than the organic.
So they decide to have progressed food by family meeting once a week. so they eat out once or twice a month for their kids.
>>So, they decided to have a family meal meeting once a week. So, they eat out once or twice a month for their kids.
In my case, I prefer to have vegetebles all the time, in the morning drink fruit juice and go to work. In the evening eat less.
>>In my case, I prefer to have vegetables all the time. In the morning, I drink fruit juice and go to work. In the evening, I eat less.
And when we have free time, I do walking around home for one two hour. That is to our healthy.
>>And when we have free time, I walk around my home for one or two hours. That is for our health.
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