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Q. How can be the problem of corruption be reduced?
A. To reduce tha problem of corruption, they have to throw away their greed and power. It is difficult to reduce that
Because if they are not throw away them, will doubt, kill and make a slur each other. So always we have to regard to everyone, respect to mutual and never doubt them each other. And then, we can be reduced the problem of corruption step by step.
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To reduce tha problem of corruption, they have to throw away their greed and power. It is difficult to reduce that
>>To reduce that problem of corruption, people in politics have to throw away their greed and power. It is difficult to reduce that problem.
Because if they are not throw away them, will doubt, kill and make a slur each other.
>>Because if they are not thrown away, politicians will kill or slur each other.
So always we have to regard to everyone, respect to mutual and never doubt them each other. And then, we can be reduced the problem of corruption step by step.
>>So, we have to give regards to everyone, respect mutually and never doubt each other. And then, we can reduce the problem of corruption gradually.
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