[1029][이름]\'s homework
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Q. Would you prefer to live in a really old historical city, or a really new modern city?
A. I prefer to live in a really new modern city. Because there is many of foundation for living life. They can talk with many people, exchange information, all of them is convient.
Even though in educational case, old city is better than modern city, but Many people don\'t like to living there. So there is a few people in old city that is old people. Young peoples are moving to the new modern city or big city.
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Hi Mr. [이름]!
Here are the corrections.
I prefer to live in a really new modern city. Because there is many of foundation for living life.
>>I prefer to live in a really new modern city. Because there are foundations for life.
They can talk with many people, exchange information, all of them is convient.
>>They can talk with many people, exchange information, all of it is convenient.
Even though in educational case, old city is better than modern city, but Many people don\'t like to living there.
>>In terms of education, an old city is better than a modern city, but many people don\'t like to live there.
So there is a few people in old city that is old people. Young peoples are moving to the new modern city or big city.
>>So, there are elderly people in old cities. Young people are moving to the new modern or big city.
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