15th [이름]mework

2018-06-12 · 첨삭 강사 Gracelyn

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello~ teacher. Gracelyn You have already fixed your website. So, I have uploaded my last [이름]mework. And, It is today's [이름]mework. Please check it. 1. Would you like to be an actress? 2. Sam always gives his wife some flowers on her birthday. 3. Some birds, for example the penguin, cannot fly. 4. There is an elephant outside the building. 5. You need a visa to visit some foreign country. 6. She often wears black jeans and an orange T-shirt. 7. Some s[이름]ps are open on Sunday, but most are closed. 8. When I was a child, I didn't like rice. 9. I'm looking for a new job next month. 10. They bought some new laptops for the students. See you tomorrow. Bye~

강사 첨삭

Hello there Mr. [이름]. Thank you very much for sending in your [이름]mework again.
By the way, I didn\'t fix the website. kkk 
Anyway, I will see you later. ^^
T. Gracelyn 

1. Would you like to be an actress?
>>correct
2. Sam always gives his wife some flowers on her birthday.
>>correct
3. Some birds, for example the penguin, cannot fly.
>>correct
4. There is an elephant outside the building.
>>correct
5. You need a visa to visit some foreign country.
>>You need a visa to visit a foreign country.
6. She often wears black jeans and an orange T-shirt.
>>correct
7. Some s[이름]ps are open on Sunday, but most are closed.
>>correct
8. When I was a child, I didn\'t like rice.
>>correct
9. I\'m looking for a new job next month.
>>correct
10. They bought some new laptops for th
e students. 
>>correct

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