1st [이름]mework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi~ Teacher
This is my [이름]mework. Please check this
Q: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? You s[이름]uld never judge a person by external appearances. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
A: I agree. I believe that everybody s[이름]uld judge a person by capabilities or performance. But I usally make a mistake about that.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, [이름]!^^
Thank you for having the time to do your [이름]mework. It\'s a great practice for your grammar and writing skills. Keep it up! See you in our class.^_^
I believe that everybody s[이름]uld judge a person by capabilities or performance.
>>> I believe that everybody s[이름]uld judge a person by his or her capabilities or performances.
But I usally make a mistake about that.
>>> But I usually make a mistake about that.
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