1st [이름]mework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your [이름]mework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

Yes, I have a bro(like a friend) w[이름] is afraid of flying. 

>> Yes, I have a friend, he is like a brother to me, w[이름] is afraid of flying. 

He has a concern of old version plane, so he always to use national airline.

>> He has a concern with old versions of planes, so he always preferred to use national airlines.

Of course, he paid a lot of money. ^ ^

>> Of course, he paid a lot of money for that. ^ ^