2018년

2019-11-11 · 첨삭 강사 Matt

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I was in the 3rd grade in 2018.I had good and sad moments when I was 10 years old.I went another school when I was in the 3rd grade. So,I have many happy and sad moments.l will tell you the most saddest and happiest moment when I was 10 years old.The most saddest moment was when my best friend fought with me.We did not hit each other,but we did not talk for hours.She talked about me with her friend and she talked about bad things about me.we made up but,I was very sad and angry.Later,we became best friends again.The most happiest moment was when I passed the test to be a member of the \"Simseok Ocestra\"I thought I did horribly on the test.But,surprise!Me and my friends are in \"Simseok Ocestra\"It is fun and interesting.What is your saddest moment and happiest moment in 2018? I experienced many things in 2018.It was my worst and best Year.I\'ve never experienced a year that was like 2018.What about you?

강사 첨삭

Hello Rose! Thank you for sharing this. Please see the corrections for your reference. Have a  good afternoon ahead!
T. Matt

I was in the 3rd grade in 2018.
>> Correct
>> I was in the third (3rd) in 2018.
I had good and sad moments when I was 10 years old.
>> Correct
I went another school when I was in the 3rd grade.
>> I went to another school when I was in the 3rd grade.
So,I have many happy and sad moments.
>> Correct
>>So, I have many happy and sad moments.
l will tell you the most saddest and happiest moment when I was 10 years old.
>> l will tell you the saddest and happiest moment when I was 10 years old.
The most saddest moment was when my best friend fought with me.
>> The saddest moment was when my best friend fought with me.
>> The saddest moment was when my best friend  and I fought.
We did not hit each other,but we did not talk for hours.
>>We did not hit each other, but we did not talk for hours.
She talked about me with her friend and she talked about bad things about me.
>> She talked to her friend about me and said bad things about me.
we made up but,I was very sad and angry.
>> We made up but I was very sad and angry.
Later,we became best friends again.
>> Later, we became best friends again.
The most happiest moment was when I passed the test to be a member of the \"Simseok Ocestra\"
>>The most happiest moment was when I passed the test to be a member of the \"Simseok Ocestra\".
I thought I did horribly on the test.
>> Correct
But,surprise!
>> Correct
Me and my friends are in \"Simseok Ocestra\"
>> Correct
It is fun and interesting.
>> Correct
What is your saddest moment and happiest moment in 2018? 
>> Correct
I experienced many things in 2018.
>> Correct
It was my worst and best Year.
>> It was my worst and best year.
I\'ve never experienced a year that was like 2018.
>> Correct
What about you?
>> Correct

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