21-Dec-2016 [이름]'s homework

2016-12-30 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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<Subject> How can you learn from other people? Give an example of something you learned from someone else and explain why and how you learned it. <Answer> I have two nephews and a dog. I so many love them, even unexpress word. Because they give me a pure and unpretense feeling. and then, I am healing. I learn to them that the 'truth' is effect emotion care to exhausted people.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]! :)

Thank you for answering our essay question.

I don\'t have a nephew yet but I will be having one early next year because my older sister is pregnant.

I don\'t really know how it\'s like to have a nephew or a niece but I do have dogs.

I actually have four dogs and I love them so much.

Although they cannot really talk, we do understand each other in a deeper level.

I love them so much and I know that they love me too.

They serve as my stress relievers and I think you also feel the same way with your nephews and dog.

I agree with you when you said, you should show your love to the people, animals, or things that matter to you because they won\'t be there forever.

Anyhow, I hope you\'re having a great day.

See you later. ^^

~Teacher Charry

I have two nephews and a dog.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I have two nephews and I also have a dog.
I so many love them, even unexpress word.

>> I love them so much and words are not enough to express my love for them.
Because they give me a pure and unpretense feeling.

>> It\'s because their feelings for me are pure and unpretentious.
and then, I am healing.

>> This helps me in healing.
I learn to them that the \'truth\' is effect emotion care to exhausted people.

>> I learned from them that showing our true/good emotions can help exhausted people.

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