22-Dec-2016 [이름]'s homework

2016-12-30 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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<subject of homework> Thik about something bad that happened to you, but taught you something. Write about this experience and what you learned from it. do you think that this knowledge will help you later in life? <Answer> I am recentry move out owns my house. The owns house is difference I have been liveed my house with my family inclue parents. that is why, to meet the rough world away under of my parents. Most of difficult moment is when start moment ride a bicycle. I am sure that I fall down and fail, and then I will stand up and rise. It is certainly will help to forward of my life.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! ^_^

A great Friday to you!

Thank you very much for diligently writing in our composition board.

I really appreciate your effort.

I agree when you said, we should always stand up and rise again whenever we encounter bad things and fail.

They say that good experiences are great but it\'s really with the bad experiences that we learn the most.

When we are experiencing hardships in life, we should not resent it but rather be thankful for it because out of our greatest failures would be our greatest triumphs.

I hope you are having a great day.

See you in our class later.

Take care always.

~Teacher Charry :)

I am recentry move out owns my house.

>> I recently moved out of our house.
The owns house is difference I have been liveed my house with my family inclue parents.

>> I now own a house. I used to live in a house with my family. 

OR >> I now own a house. I used to live in a house with my siblings and parents. 
that is why, to meet the rough world away under of my parents.

>> That is why, I have to meet the rough world away from my parents.
Most of difficult moment is when start moment ride a bicycle.

>>The most difficult moment I could remember was the moment I started learning how to ride a bicycle.
I am sure that I fall down and fail, and then I will stand up and rise.

>> I am sure that if I fall down and fail, then I will stand up and rise.
It is certainly will help to forward of my life.

>> It will certainly help me to move forward in my life.

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