23-Dec-2016 [이름]'s homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]! ^^
Thank you very much for taking the time to write in our composition board.
I really appreciate your effort and I am really happy that you check your feedback page regularly.
I also think a president should be wise.
In addition to that, a president should have the ability to empower and help others.
Anyhow, I hope you are enjoying your time in Taiwan.
I miss you already.
See you after your vacation.
Take care always.
~Teacher Charry :)
When I saw the subjct moment, I was rose the sentens that my charry writed in passed class feedback.
>> When I saw the subject matter, I remembered the saying my Teacher Charry included in my feedback page.
\" Leaders become great, not because of their power. but because of their ability to empower others.\"
>> \"Leaders become great, not because of their power but because of their ability to empower others.\"
the former and the letter is same means but the more thought, the more recognize the diifferent means.
>> The former and the latter seem to have the same meaning the more I think about it, the more that I recognize the difference.
For example, In Korea\'s president was step downed in political leader position.
>> For example in Korea, the president was asked to step down from her political position.
Most of all, she hasn\'t wisdom but she has many reason resign the position.
>> Most of all, she doesn\'t have the wisdom but she has many reasons not to resign from her position.
Because she doesn\'t with rough experience became president.
>> It\'s because she didn\'t have enough experience when she became a president.
All Koreans are need to elect new wise president.
>> All Koreans need to elect a new and wise president.
Scilicet, I think the important qualities a president is wisedom through experience and find out another leader\'s abilities.
>> I think the important qualities a president should have are wisdom through experience and the other leader\'s abilities such as integrity, honesty and humility.
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