3rd [이름]mework

2018-05-23 · 첨삭 강사 Gracelyn

학생이 쓴 원문

I did complete two [이름]mework. One is on the book and the other is your feedback. 1. on the book Q:What was the last thing you did that made you feel so much better? A:I played golf with my business partners last weekend. It made me feel so better. Q: W[이름] are the people you always check on? A: Two people! It is my son and the other is my daughter. 2. Your feedback - They usually keep their winter clothes in boxes. - We saw some deer on our way to the beach. - She bought two scarves in our online s[이름]p. - Our uncle often tells us funny stories. - We often have fishes for dinner on Fridays - My sister likes ice cream with blueberries - Our dog has never had any lice. - The girls bought three dresses in the mall - [이름]w many persons work in your office? - The famer has a lot of sheep and oxen Thank you. See you tomorrow~

강사 첨삭

Hello there Mr. [이름]! Thank you very much for doing your [이름]mework. I really appreciate it. 
I\'ll talk to you in our class. Have a great evening.
T. Gracelyn

1. on the book
Q:What was the last thing you did that made you feel so much better?
A:I played golf with my business partners last weekend.
>>correct
It made me feel so better.
>>correct

Q: W[이름] are the people you always check on?
A: Two people! It is my son and the other is my daughter.
>>correct

2. Your feedback

- They usually keep their winter clothes in boxes.
>>correct
- We saw some deer on our way to the beach. 
>>correct
- She bought two scarves in our online s[이름]p. 
>>correct
- Our uncle often tells us funny stories.
>>correct
- We often have fishes for dinner on Fridays
>>We often have fish for dinner on Fridays.
- My sister likes ice cream with blueberries.
>>correct
- Our dog has never had any lice.
>>correct
- The girls bought three dresses in the mall.
>>correct
- [이름]w many persons work in your office?
>>[이름]w many people work in your office?
- The farmer has a lot of sheep and oxen.
>>correct

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