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Q.: If you could eat out with a celebrity or a VIP who would it be and why?
A. If I could eat out with someone, I want to eat out with a President of Korea. The reason is because I can\'t meet him in my whole life. So If I meeting him, I\'d like to hang out with a pork belly and a Soju. Soju is Korea whisky. It is very good. All of Korean love it.
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If I could eat out with someone, I want to eat out with a President of Korea.
>> correct (awesome sentence)
The reason is because I can\'t meet him in my whole life. So If I meeting him, I\'d like to hang out with a pork belly and a Soju.
>> The reason is that I don\'t have the chance to meet him in my whole life, so if I meet him, I\'d like to hang out while eating pork belly and drinking Soju.
Soju is Korea whisky. It is very good. All of Korean love it.
>> Soju is a Korean whisky. It is very good, so all Koreans love it.
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