4th [이름]mework

2018-05-24 · 첨삭 강사 Gracelyn

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Hello, Teacher~ I did my [이름]mework. I'd appreciated it if you check up. Tom is not at all like his brother Paul. I’ve been to the hairdresser’s as you can see. Larry has joined a telep[이름]ne company as a product manager. When james was a student, he worked every summer as a waiter. Our new room-mate, Mary, looks like Madonna. Alex qualified as an engineer before attending a business sc[이름]ol. Julie is completely overworked. She works like a slave. Today is Friday, so today, like on every Friday, we wear casual clothes in the office. Strong leaders, like Winston Churchill, are few and far between. Toms is a very good swimmer. He can swim like a fish.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Mr. [이름]! Thank you once again for sending in your [이름]mework.
I\'ll talk to you in class. Have a great evening!
T. Gracelyn

Tom is not at all like his brother Paul.
>>correct
I’ve been to the hairdresser’s as you can see.
>>correct
Larry has joined a telep[이름]ne company as a product manager.
>>correct
When James was a student, he worked every summer as a waiter.
>>correct
Our new room-mate, Mary, looks like Madonna.
>>correct
Alex qualified as an engineer before attending a business sc[이름]ol.
>>correct
Julie is completely overworked. She works like a slave.
>>correct
Today is Friday, so today, like on every Friday, we wear casual clothes in the office.
>>correct
Strong leaders, like Winston Churchill, are few and far between.
>>correct
Toms is a very good swimmer. He can swim like a fish.
>>correct

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