4월28일[이름]\'s homework

2020-04-29 · 첨삭 강사 Rachel

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Q. What would you do if you had a horrible day at work? A. Sometime I had a horrible at work twice a year. You would have had a things. Now I \'ll say that. I should have reported a project proposal untill the next in the morning, but I couldn\'t because while I was drawing up it was made by the word, but and then I wouldn\'t save the dacument by myself. I tried to open it but it was disappeared then. I would say \' Oh my God\' Finally, I should have drew up the profect again all night.

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Hi Sir [이름],
Thanks for this great response to the homework you were given. You are much appreciated for diligently doing your tasks despite your busy schedule. Great job!
-Rachel
Sometime I had a horrible at work twice a year. You would have had a things. Now I \'ll say that.
>> I experience having a horrible day at work twice a year, and I  think sometimes you also experience that, so I will talk about it.
I should have reported a project proposal untill the next in the morning, but I couldn\'t because while I was drawing up it was made by the word, but and then I wouldn\'t save the dacument by myself.
>> I was supposed to make a report on a project proposal until the morning the next day, but I couldn\'t because I used Word to make it but I couldn\'t save the document. 
I tried to open it but it was disappeared then. I would say \' Oh my God\'
>> I tried to check if it was saved, but it was gone. 
Finally, I should have drew up the profect again all night.
>> In the end, I had to redo the project all night. 

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