4월8일 homework

2019-04-09 · 첨삭 강사 May

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WRITING TASK Answer the questions. What do you complain about when you are bored? For you, what are some best ways to stop being bored? Answer When I am bored, I don\'t have much a complaint. But It is not a complaint, I alone used to watching the movies, reading a book and work out. And I play the computer game with my son. The name of game is \'Overwatch\'. I think best ways which stop being bored are watching the movies, work out, and reading a book. I sometimes travel to the city by bicycle. Then the boredom will be completely gone. And another way which I spend boring time in the jjimjibang. Jjimjilbang is Korea dry sauna. There are many in korea. Usually it\'s a place where a lot of people are going. I\'m going there twice a month.

강사 첨삭

Thanks for sharing your ways [이름]! But I believe that you\'re always happy.
See you tomorrow. ^^
~~Teacher May~~
When I am bored, I don\'t have much a complaint.
>> When I am bored, I don\'t have complaints.
But It is not a complaint, I alone used to watching the movies, reading a book and work out.
>> But it is not actually a complaint. I just watch movies alone, read book and work out.
And I play the computer game with my son.
>> I also play a computer game with my son.
The name of game is \'Overwatch\'. 
>> The game is called \'Overwatch\'. 
I think best ways which stop being bored are watching the movies, work out, and reading a book.
>> I think that these are the best ways to get rid of boredom.
I sometimes travel to the city by bicycle.
>> CORRECT
Then the boredom will be completely gone.
>> Then the boredom is completely gone.
And another way which I spend boring time in the jjimjibang. 
>> And another thing to do when I feel bored is going to the jjimjibang. 
Jjimjilbang is Korea dry sauna.
>> CORRECT
There are many in korea.
>> There are a lot of this in Korea.
Usually it\'s a place where a lot of people are going.
>> People usually go in this place.
I\'m going there twice a month.
>> I go there twice a month.

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