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+homework
Q:If you could live anywhere else in the world, where would you live?Why
A:If I could live anywhere, I\'d live in Japan. I traveled Japan quite a lot. Even I can\'t speak Japanese but people who live there are so nice. So I didn\'t feel uncomfortable. When I asked the way where I want to go, most people take me to there in person. Or some people took me to the police office. That experience was so fun for my memory. So I like the country, their culture, food and mood so on. But Japan and Korea aren\'t good relationship. so I don\'t want to live at the moment. But if it is okay, I absolutely want to live Japan.
+preparing my interview
Q:what is your biggest weakness?
A:I need to improve my impulsive actions, such as buying things on impulse or doing something I didn’t deliberate on. To improve, I started to write a diary so I can be more accountable, and when I go to the supermarket or go shopping, I make a list as well. I am trying not to buy that much so I just browse.
강사 첨삭
Hi Donna! Appreciate the effort you put in your homework! ^ ^
Nice of you to share. Japan is also one of the places I would like to live in. I have heard so much good things about this country and I\'m really eager to experience it myself. Hopefully in the future. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
If I could live anywhere, I\'d live in Japan.
>>CORRECT
I traveled Japan quite a lot.
>>I have traveled to Japan quite a lot.
Even I can\'t speak Japanese but people who live there are so nice.
>>Even if I can\'t speak Japanese, people are all so nice.
So I didn\'t feel uncomfortable.
>>So I didn\'t feel uncomfortable when I was there.
When I asked the way where I want to go, most people take me to there in person.
>>When I asked the way to places, most people would take me there themselves.
Or some people took me to the police office.
>>Or some took me to the police station.
That experience was so fun for my memory.
>>I really liked that experience and a fun memory.
So I like the country, their culture, food and mood so on.
>>So I like the country\'s culture, food, mood and so on.
But Japan and Korea aren\'t good relationship. so I don\'t want to live at the moment.
>>But Japan and Korea are not in good terms, so I don\'t want to live there at the moment.
But if it is okay, I absolutely want to live Japan.
>>But if the situation gets better, I would absolutely want to live in Japan.
I need to improve my impulsive actions, such as buying things on impulse or doing something I didn’t deliberate on.
>>I want to change my impulsive buying habits and work on doing things thoughtfully and thoroughly.
To improve, I started to write a diary so I can be more accountable, and when I go to the supermarket or go shopping, I make a list as well.
>>CORRECT
I am trying not to buy that much so I just browse.
>>CORRECT
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