A enchanted clock 1. By ji-[이름]

Hello ~ My name is ella. Nice to meet you. Our family just moved in. So were going to be neghibors. Oh I hear mom calling me. Bye~ Bye~ See you at the morning~ Hi right now it is seven in the morning. Guess what!! Last night, a magical thing happend. You see we have a big clock in the living room. It was not our's but when we moved in we saw a big clock hanging on the living room. And WOW! It was like the clock was enchanted. It has a glowing sparckls arond. Oh and about last night, I went to the living room library before I go to bed. And I saw that big clock. And it's clock hands are moving very fast! And next thing I knew was that I was going in the clock. And there was a world with sparkling glows. And I have so much fun!!!! I had snow fight with a real live snow man. And I ate lot of lce cream at the ice cream land. And I had los of advantures. And after that, I went back to my reguler house. See you at the next chapter!!!

Hi there, Ji[이름]! This is a very creative, imaginative and wonderful story! I like it. Thanks for submitting this and sharing it with me. Please review my corrections here. Take note of proper capitalization, punctuation and spelling. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello ~ >> CORRECT! My name is ella. >> CORRECT! OR >> My name is [Name].Nice to meet you. >> CORRECT! Our family just moved in. >> CORRECT! So were going to be neghibors. >> So we\'re going to be neighbors.Oh I hear mom calling me. >> Oh, I hear my mom calling me.Bye~ Bye~>> CORRECT! See you at the morning~ >> See you in the morning!Hi >> CORRECT! OR >> Hi! right now it is seven in the morning. >> Right now, it is seven in the morning. OR >> It is now seven in the morning.Guess what!! >> Guess what?Last night, a magical thing happend. >> CORRECT! >> happened You see we have a big clock in the living room. >> You see, we have a big clock in the living room.It was not our\'s but when we moved in we saw a big clock hanging on the living room. >> It was not ours, but it was hanging in the living room when we moved in.And WOW! >> CORRECT! It was like the clock was enchanted. >> CORRECT! It has a glowing sparckls arond.>> It has glowing sparkles around it. Oh and about last night, I went to the living room library before I go to bed. >> Oh! About last night, I went to the library in the living room before I went to bed.And I saw that big clock. >> CORRECT! And it\'s clock hands are moving very fast! >> Its hands were moving very fast! And next thing I knew was that I was going in the clock. >> The next thing I knew, I was going inside the clock. And there was a world with sparkling glows. >> There was a world filled with sparkling glows of light inside it.And I have so much fun!!!! >> I had so much fun!I had snow fight with a real live snow man. >> I had a snow fight with a real, live snow man.And I ate lot of lce cream at the ice cream land. >> CORRECT! OR >> I also ate a lot of ice cream at the Ice Cream Land. -betterAnd I had los of advantures. >> I had lots of adventures. And after that, I went back to my reguler house. >> After that, I returned to my house.See you at the next chapter!!! >> See you next time!