Anti discrimination
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Some anti-discrimination laws have failed in passing in the assembly in Korea because of strong resistance and objections of many churches and conservative politicians. I think this will be different. The Democratic Party, which has a progressive character, has become a majority party and a ruling party. In addition, the current government is very active in all anti-discrimination with President Lee Jae-myung at the lead.
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Hi, Gi [이름]!
It\'s nice to know that the current government administration is pushing for the anti-discrimination law to be passed. I think this can benefit minorities in Korea and, at the same time, open possibilities for a more diverse country.
- T. Caitlyn
Some anti-discrimination laws have failed in passing in the assembly in Korea because of strong resistance and objections of many churches and conservative politicians.
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I think this will be different.
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The Democratic Party, which has a progressive character, has become a majority party and a ruling party.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: The Democratic Party, which has a progressive character, has become both the majority party and the ruling party.
In addition, the current government is very active in all anti-discrimination with President Lee Jae-myung at the lead.
>> In addition, the current government is very active in anti-discrimination efforts, with President Lee Jae-myung leading the way.
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